It's been a few hours since we found Fluttershy,but I don't expected that my friend or you could say as my marein my world,a lot of readers doesn't like it,well it's already happen I can't help it,anyway let me introduce my self,I am Brawny Stomp,usually some pony call me the changeling's king, how do I become and what happen to Chrysalis,the story is that damn queen are asking me to go to a cocoon, and turn me to a changlng,but a human safe me up and turn me to a good half pony and half changeling, well almost a good pony, anyway he made me defeat Chrysalis, that is great, isn't.well almost great,but the problem I get is I become a king in my world, but it's changeling's world either, if you ask what's that spouse to be the mean, it means I can rule the monster, at the first time, I thought they were a monster, but actually their head was brainwashed, it's true that they want to eat love, but I made that as an illegal thing, but they kept begging for food, so as a promise to my subjects I made a thing, and that is the most insane idea ever,I think, the changeling most promise to love me, and I promise to love my kingdom, so I do feed my self and I feed my subjects, well the human that got save me is Alvin, well, after a long journey and a lot of things, I got something that is sad, I mean it is the most touching things ever, and that is Fluttershy that took care by a human, Alvin said that she already made the story,even his grammar are like um something, anyway let's get back,
3 hours after I found Fluttershy,in other world that is not my world, well it's Fluttershy's house in other world, with Alvin sitting next to me
"Hey Brawny are you okay?" Alvin asked me,and I replied yes, I turn myself with him to a stallion using an age spell it's a little bit hard, and with our stallion face we looked at Fluttershy that still a slept, because something, and we don't really know about it, after a few hours of wating she opened her eyes,and asked what happen, because of that we told her that you feel to the void, we both said sorry and then told her that we got her to the nearest dimension, and we got this world, and I said that later we will be get out from here as soon as we can, but we can't that time, because something makes everything messy and that person still in the dimension, anyway we told her that we sent her to her home, A.K.A Fluttershy's cottage, she saw her own mare, and we told her that she may not to tell Fluttershy
William jack:
it's been 8 month since I lost my Fluttershy, it's a hell hole thing for me, my daughter taken by 2 foal and Celestia next to them, anyway I believe that she live with peaceful with her friends, Wow, I still imagine us playing together, or sometimes I was heard her voice, well it's not a joke,or it's my imagination, and after a few minuets walking and I met the place where I found Fluttershy, it's a simple place, with bushes and other thing, these things made my sweet lovely times with Fluttershy, after saw that, I remember that there's a world cup foot ball that I must watch, so I went to my house, that s a farm, and a few walks later I came to a weird cardboard, usually my next door people aren't littering like this, and it's memorize me with my Fluttershy, when I opened it, inside of it there is a disk, when then I continued to my house, I turned on my laptop, and opened the disk, it's just an empty disk,
"What a waste, I'll watch the foot ball world cup" I said, it's hard to believe but when I want to take the disk a fuzzy sound came out, and a the screen turned to black and white with Discord, so I thought that this is my next door people or my friend pranking me, so I took my shotgun in my bedroom ,and pointed it to the laptop, and pile of some came out, and then a voice with Discord's voice makes me surprised and thought that this isn't a prank or a joke, he was in my room,
"Wowowow, Discord?, why you are here" I asked, then he told
"Well,isn't a human that's a countryside farmer, with a magic long stick" he said
"It's not a magic,and get out from here" I said,and then I shot a bullet, but no one was harmed, but my laptop broke, my gun was grabbed, and when I shot, it's not a bullet came,but it's a pink butterfly
"Well,well well,it's looks like you've just created Fluttershy's cutiemar, isn't?" he said, he made me remember about Fluttershy, I tried to let her go, and this thing wants me to make me to not let her go,so Itried to punch her
"hah,miss it's looks like your daddy power have been lost for about a month, isn't daddy" he said, that makes me angry, the only one who may to call me that is my little Fluttershy
"Well, what is it again, ah yes, I want to make something with you, just sign this paper and I'll give you a way to Fluttershy her world, I don't know that I should accept it, but I said
"NEVER"
"Well,if that is you choice" he said,then he was gone, that night after watched the world cup foot ball, I went to slept, I got a nightmare, I got Fluttershy slaughtered by the 2 foals, with bloodbath, I was woke up and looking around and I worried with that dream, I knew that Discord made it, but it was made me worry about her ,So I took the disk and play it again and the same thing happened, Discord came out and then I said
"Well then take me to my daughter" I said, then he said
"Well if it's your choice" Discord said, then they went to a portal and then they gone
Canterlot, other world, Celestia in her palace
"What a luck we can find the mare you serch don't you think Alvin, Brawny" she asked at Brawny and Alvin
"Well it is your highness" I said then we looked around
"Anyway it was a great thing we could found her" I said
"Yeah it is a great thing" Alvin said while walking and our eyes were stopped at a weird stained glass art
"Wait, isn't that spouse to be Discord's place" I said then Celestia looked
"Yes it is, ugh I really hate him, tell your mare and we will meet at Discord's statue" he said and then I said
"Okay" I said, then I teleported my self with Alvin to Fluttershy, well my mare with other Fluttershy, I usually call my Fluttershy Butterfly or my mare, or Buttershy
"Hey there Brawny, how it's going" my Fluttershy said
"It's a great thing that having a friend that have the same favorite thing" the other Fluttershy said
"Well we have 1 job, Celestia asked Fluttershy from this world to meet Twilight Sparkle" I said then we went to Twilight's library, or you could say the Golden oak library, with 4 times knocking and Twilight opened the door with some panic
"Oh no what should we do, Princess Celestia said that there is something weird" he said, then I said
"When I with Alvin were in the palace I saw the Dicord's stained glass are changed , I mean there is only his horn left" I said
"That weird though, what's Discord planning" Alvin said, Alvin's grammar sucks, I don't know why, but it's sucks
"anyway, let's go to the palace" I said then when it's the time Celestia in front of the stone with the 6 mane from this world were came with Fluttershy the 6 elements
"So what's going to be happen" I said
" I don't know, but I believe something evil" he said, then the 6 mane melted the stone, and Discord appeared
"It's been a long time since I saw ponies isn't" Discord said and then the 6 mane gets ready for charge there magic while 3 of us looked at them, and then he said
"And for Brawny's butterfly" he said, then I confused
"I present to you, the human" he said, then Alvin and I were surprised while Fluttershy got confused
William Jack
I came out from a statue and saw the ponies, the ponies and the 2 other ponies, they were already became a stallion, then I saw my Fluttershy and hug her, but when I tried it, she kept running away, then I asked Discord
"Wait you said you were going to show mme my Fluttershy" I said, then Discord
"Yes she is, but I never told you about her memory" he said, then I thought he was right, then I turned angry, it looks like he lied to me, then I said
"you son of a bi.." before I continued he was gone
"Well I thought you would knew that he is a liar" Brawny said, but Alvin doesn't say anything
"Hey Fluttershy, we need to go" Alvin said,then Brawny asked Fluttershy to go either
"Look, I knew that you would be like this, it's totally a wrong thing, I knew that what have I done are the worst thing that I have done, but I don't have any choice" Brawny said, then Celestia looked at me with her angry eyes that I already helped Discord escaped
"Well, we won't make you go away just like that, c'mon you must be have been walking for 30 minuets" Alvin said
"Yes and how do you know about it" I asked
"Well piece of a cake"
"I don't know what should I say" I said, then I followed him then
"Where should we sleep anyway" said Brawny,
"I don't have idea" I said, then Twilight invited us to go to sleep in the library
"Well thank you Twilight" I said, then we over slept, we took our place and then take a place to go to sleep
Brawny Stomp:
"ugh" I said when I went to the bed, then I dreamed about my parents died, I woke up and I saw everyone was asleep, so went back to sleep, and the same dream I got, I woke up and then I woke Alvin up
"Alvin, please wake up" I said that, he woke and then asked me what happen, I answered it
"Well, I got the same dream again and again, so, what should I do, I don't know how do I got the same dream again and again"
"Well sure, I'll company you, let's go to sleep in my.." Alvin stopped and then he put his hooves on his head
"My head" he said, then he became so quiet,
"I took back my words, you can sleep alone you changeling" he said, then I surprised how mean he is then he went to sleep back
"What why" I said, then I looked around and saw Twilight with the human read together, So I went there and then asked them
"Hey what's going on?" I asked
"Well we serch for something that makes Fluttershy to remember Fluttershy" I said, then
"What....actully it's a great idea, but the problem , how do we make her remember him without hurting her" I said, then I thought and thought, and I told him
"Next day we will make a party, and we will make Fluttershy to remember you without hating you" I said, then I went back to sleep, but I don't get any nightmare, the next day, I asked Fluttershy to go with the human, I never asked his name, but believe he is a good guy, they went to somewhere, I with Alvin prepare the party, when it's the time, I invited everypony to the party, everyone seems love it, Rainbow dash made a sonic rainboom, the last thing I went threw was looked at the stars, it's normal to me, but it's not normal to the human, their City so bright in the night, I knew it because Alvin told me
William Jack: before party
"I don't know what should I do Alvin, I don't have any idea" I said, then Alvin told me,
"Try to get near her, and do what could you do, do what do she like to do" Alvin said, then I looked at the CMC, and they were said
"Hey there, we don't really know about you, but some pony said you know us more then any pony, could you help us to find our cutie mark" they were asked me, then Alvin was gone ,I don't know what happened but when I saw Fluttershy flew in the sky, I knew it's her, So I after her, then I asked is she her, or not, she told her that my Fluttershy are in the cottage ,so, I went there, I found her with her animals, then I said hello,
"Hello there" I said, then he turned shy, then I said
"It's OK" I said, then he said
"You remind me of Alvin, he is a human ,but Twilight from my world changed him" he said, I surprised then I remember , he told me that there's someone that's the same with me happened
"Well, would you like to be with me, I don't have any friends in this world nor in my world actually, " I said,
"Ok then" she said, then we both were walked around, talking and other things that's fun
"Wow you such a good person, I think" he said, then when the afternoon came, I invited by Rarity to her boutique, she gave a suit that's look like so glorious, I never used this kind of clothes before, she said it's for me, I used it and then goes to the party and had a little party
Let's talk about Alvin
"Ugh where am I" Alvin said then he found him self in his lamp, then he took a chance, he went out from the bottle and then found him self in a road that is square, and then Alvin realize that he was in Discord's world
"What Discorded world" Alvin said, then he saw a cotton candy cloud
"Oh god, I need to go" Alvin said, then he tried to become a pony but he can't
"What, how" Alvin thought, he realize that he can't stand with 4 hooves, he looked around and then he went to his bottle and then he took the green match
"I need to find Brawny and other"
"You don't need to" said Discord from his mane came out
"Discord, get me out, I don't like this place at all, and what happen,the last thing I remember was BRawny asked to sleep with him" I said, then Discord told Alvin that he control him,
"What do you say" Alvin asked, then Alvin had an headache
"Well, well, it's not time yet my puppet" Discord said, then Alvin said
"Yes master"( Honestly he is a freaking( change freaking to facking) bastard
Brawny and William at the same time
"So what's next" Brawny asked, then Fluttershy asked something
"umm human what's your name is" Fluttershy asked,
"man that question made me having a bad feeling" William arguing in his mind "My name is William" he said
"Aw I just know it" Brawny said
"oh ok then,and where's your other self from the other world" he said, then Brawny said that he don't
"That is weird I thought he was searching for you" said William
"So umm,could we become a best friend" said Fluttershy
"What did you just said" he said, and Brawny thought
"Oh No" Brawny said
"I had enough for this don't you remember me" I said then Celestia came
"Stop is, human you under arrest" he said, then Brawny freeze because he doesn't know what happen, then he was jailed,
William jack
"I don't get it what's going on" I thought then Brawny said
"Come Brawny"
"Ye-Yes your highness"
"What have I done" I said to my self then Alvin came out from a green portal
"Yes I escaped, ah yes" I said, then Alvin turn to human
"You are really a human" I said
"Please, please don't listen to him" Alvin said, then Discord came out from and then threw Alvin's bottle
"Well he is gone, just you and me" he said, but I won't listen to him, but I listen to him
"You see everyone you can't trust anybody" He said
"Well I can trust Alvin"
"No you can trust me, why, did they done the thing that make Fluttershy don't forgot you, no she forgot you, now do I got what do you asked, I am going to asked you, do you know that Celestia doesn't want Fluttershy to remember you" he said, he was right though, I really angry with Celestia
"I'll give you my power to destroy him" Discord said,
Fluttershy, after they were captured him
"What's going on in here" she said, then a Voice like Discord
"Discord where are you" she said,
"Well it's me the Discord from your world" Discord said then his color came up and she saw Discord
"Oh what's the proof" I asked
"Well you take care of me from the blue flu a few weeks ago" Discord said, then FLuttershy said
"I don't understand what's happening" Fluttersy said
"You want to know, it's going to hurt your feeling" he said,then he gave a letter, it's the letter that FLuttershy gave, she started to cried then a flow of memory were came out
"Daddy, but why don't they tell me" Fluttershy asked, then Discord told
"It's simple, it's because they don't want you to had a bad felt, anyway let's talk to the plan, your dad was brainwashed by me from this world, I really need you too do something, and that's visit him" Discord said, then Alvin's bottle was summoned and then Alvin came out,
"Oh my god, thank you thank you thank you" Alvin said, then Discord said
"Now Alvin because me from other world made you can't leave ,you need to make him to stone,I'll sent you to the Golden oak library" said him, then Alvin said,
"RRRRRoger" Alvin said, then he was gone
"What's should I do now" Fluttershy asked
"You aren't powerful probably, but kindness is the biggest power in the world, and you can make your father to remember you, now go" Discord said, then she thought and her eyes turn sharp, she flew to the sky with as fast as she can
in Canterlot, Celestia's castle
"But your highness why did you jail him" Brawny asked
"If he doesn't Discord would use his feeling to defeat me" she said, and then I heard tapping shoes, then I thought
"Who's that" then I asked Celestia to stopped then I looked, and it's him, he is already Discorded
"Oh no, Look Celestia, not question, no harmng kay" Alvin said, then he turned to a changeling and became Celestia, then I teleported him out,then I came out from the hiding place, and I spoke
"What are you doing in here, you spouse to be in the jail" I said, it's 3 times more fear then ever, his aura was soo evil,
"Ah Celestia" he said, then he spoke
"Today, I just made a big mistake to not fight you, and I'll say thank you for made me left my daughter, and I'll pay it right now" he said, I got shaking a little, then I told him
"I am sorry, but I can't make you stay here for more longer" I said, then I charged my horn to make him asleep, but he attacked me first, my power was drained and I thought
"Damn, I hope I can say thank you to be my friend to Twilight,Rarity,Pinkie,my Fluttershy,Rainbow dash, Applejack" I said, the there was a pony flew, it's not Fluttershy, but it was white, and her style of mane ,it's like Rainbow dash, but who is she, and she kicked the pony
"HAha, I never thought that the green match are real, and how the heck Alvin found it, anyway thanks to Celestia ,she turned me to a pony" she said,
Your highness are you alright" he said then I shout
"RUN"
"Huh?" she said, but it's already to late,"argh"
"No ONe is going to help her" he said then he walked slowly to me, FLuttershy came from the window and then shout
"Stop dad" she said, then I was glad to see her
"I am not your dad anymore" he said
"no dad listen, I still you daughter, and I will always" she said, then her dad started to crying
"Do you still remeber that abandon house, I still remember you always taught me to not give up, even your wings are slow, and I still remember, you said something that is still in your heart, you love me so much, please dad, don't do this" she said, then he looked up and saw the sun came up
"Well you are my mare and I won't forget it" He said, I really think that is the saddest moment of my Fluttershy, she made someone to be normal
"Graah stupid human" he said, then I thought what the hell then hay
He took a sword, and then tried to stab ,and I got a visitor, the 6 mane from this world, and they wear the elements, then they shot some beems, Discord realise it and trid to dodge it,
"come" Discord said, then he grabbed William and jump over, we thought that he'll die, I can't talk he drained my power to much
"No" Fluttershy said, then he flew so fast and then grabbed his father
Alvin's moment
"Oh c'mon why do he jump "of,he said, then He looked around and saw the pony that came
"Oh no, what happened," said while he was came asked Rainbow dash to moved him to her
"No No no no no" Alvin said, then he touched the pony's neck
"Well she is not dead" and then Rainbow dash asked
"Who's that mare is, she is just look like me" Rainbow dash said
"Oh no you won't surprised but she is....." Alvin surprised by her awake
"What the heck just happening" She said
"Clam down girl"
"Where's that human is"
"he is falling"
"What how?" she asked
"No time to lose Australia girl, jump over" Alvin said,
"Ok" he said, and then walked to the window
"Oh and one more thing" Alvin said
"What is it" she asked back
"It's nice to see you believed me Rainbow Tia" Alvin said
"Well it's nice to see you too" then she jump over
"I hope she is Okay"
"Fluttershy let it go you will die if you hold me" William said
"No dad, I won't go again" Fluttershy said while falling
"But.."
"Hey need someone to help" Rainbow Tia said
"Yes" William said
"Ok then, Alvin said, then he lift them two, and then a trail of rainbow that shot by the 6 mane
"Oh yeah, time to go Discord, he said, then he grabbed Fluttershy's back hooves
"Not without her" Discord said, then he took Fluttershy wings
"Nooooooo" said William, then Crash ,thud
"I'I am sorry bro" Rainbow tia said
"Lower me and I will take her" William said, then Rainbow lower him, Discord already turned to stone, while Fluttershy(i'm sorry) dead
"Oh my god" Brawny said, then Brawny asked
"Ok that's awkward time to saw your friend" Brawny said then he went back to changeling, and the 6 mane charge their magic
"Wow, wow wow, don't do it, he is good"
"Well, thank you other Fluttershy, Rainbow dash, oh and you are cool," the point to Twilight" Twilight, hey egghead do you want to see my math, wow it's so hard, anyway" point at Rarity," do you still need to work with something I really love your clothes, anyway" pointing Applejack" do you know that first time I met you, you allowed me to, I thought you will make me sleep in your brother's room, but No you gave me in the barn,NONO you don't lie, but you just forget" anyway, Pinkie pointed" so why there's no party, we are new here"
"Well you came here for a quick moment"
"Anyway Alvin ,Discord already stoned, you can move now freely" Brawny said, then he became a person that walks with 2 feet
"Haha, I love my feet" Alvin said, then he picked his bottle and then they hear a hooves steps
"Who's there" Alvin asked, then Celestia was came
"Ugh what happened" she asked, then Brawny surprised
"What, did you said what happened, oh god, what's wrong in here, Celestia what happened, what do you remember" Brawny asked
"Well, I went to my room, and then I saw a shadow, or a dark smoke, he spoke that he was going to snap me" he said, then Brawny said
"That means that Celesta is fake" Brawny said, then Rainbow tia were came from window with Fluttershy that was(was: for past) dead
"You gotta to be kidding me right, no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no Fluttershy, why did you go, Why" Brawny said with tears
"Oh god, I am sorry Brawny, I am sorry for your mare" Alvin said," and bro (William) I'm sorry about this"
"I don't know what have to say, but I can't hold these feelings" said Brawny then Alvin heard something
"Alvin, Alvin, I want to talk to Brawny before he go somewhere" said Fluttershy, Alvin thought WTH, the he turned around and saw Fluttershy's ghost
"Fluttershy" Alvin said, then he made a block that made Fluttershy's colour appear, but it's just for a few second
"What have that creature done" Brawny said, the she explained everything
"I-I-I," then Fluttershy appeared near Brawny and then kissed Brawny, it's a terrible shock then Discord appered, Discord from Brawny's world
"Ahh Discord I don't know you are here" Alvin said,
"Who is he, is he a friend" they asked
"Yes girls he is" Alvin said
"Oh my, for Lauren Faust" he said, Brawny thought what should he do
"Brawny, look at page 13" he gave Brawny a book, and he opened the page 13, and he found a spell call fenotonia
"It's a spell that could make someone that's is dead to alive, but someone need to sacrifice himself" Discord said, then Brawny said
"I'll do it, I'llsay that I will exchange my life wth her, so she'll alive, and I-I"
"Wait no, there's must be other way, I won't let you do that" said Alvin
"Hgh, try to do it genie, anyway I have the last wish" Brawny said
"No, I mean what is it, I mean don't you dare"
"Try to make him alive" said Brawny, and Alvin's face turn really sad
"What's wrong Alvin" Brawny asked
"Well, I can't turn someone back to alive anymore"
"...then freeze don't ever try to move until Fluttershy asked to move" Brawny said
"What?"then Alvin freeze
"What are you thinking" Alvin asked
"Celestia I believe you can do this, then please do it to me" he said, the tears are like a small river that had a stream, she started the spell, then he screamed while it's the middle of the sacrifice
"No don't leave me" Alvin said, the scream slowly gone, before it's really gone, Celestia pushed by William
"Noo, you can't do that" said William
"It's really painful, argh, but I need to" said Brawny and then he fell
"Please don't you have something, why do you want to do it" Alvin asked
"Well, I have a parents, they died, and I want to visit him again" Brawny said
"Do you know that some changeling will say, why do our king died" said Alvin and then Brawny looked at Alvin , Alvin continued
"Because he wants to saw his family up there, but aren't we his family we are the one who lay by Chrysalis, and if Chrysalis is our mother, then you are our father" said Alvin and then Brawny said
"You right, I am their father, but what about Fluttershy" looked at Fluttershy
"Well, think think think,oh my god, Hey umm my friend, please do a favor for me, you may not to come back to pony's world ever again" Alvin said, then William agreed, Celestia done the spell again, Fluttershy back to life again, but her father was gone
"but how do I meet him again" Fluttershy asked
"Good question, but first let me move" said Alvin ,
"You can move Alvin" Fluttershy said, Alvin went to his lamp, and gave Fluttershy the green match
"Wow I never thought of that" Brawny said, then Alvin said how to find him and where's the door, so he done it, Alvin and Brawny went back to finish their mission as a pony in human world, using the green match first then the blue match
"Great advanture actually Alvin"
"yeah it is" Alvin said, while their walked seems to be long ,Brawny and Alvin got a surprise
"Wait Alvin, you left me alone, why" said Rainbow tia
"I am sorry tia, but I need to, don't you remember what should I do in human world" Alvin asked, then she sad
"Wait, actually I found this in my room" she said, Alvin thought what is it, then Rainbow tia gave him a pink bottle
"Oh crap"
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